2012년 5월 12일 토요일

Do you agree or disagree with the following



Teachers should be paid according to how much their student learn. 

School is a place to learn knowledge, but if the school pays salary based on the student’s grade, what will happen? Will this help teachers and the students?

I do not agree with the statement teachers should be paid according to how much their student learns. Firstly, teachers are not the only people who are responsible for their students’ studies. Students themselves and other people, who take care of students after school, are also responsible for their academic accomplishments. A teacher does not have enough time in a class to give individual attention to every student. Parents and other people, who take care of students after school, are also responsible for their learning after school to improve their grades.

Secondly, every student gains knowledge with his own natural ability to learn. It is not necessary that all students will learn something at the same time. For example, in a class some students gives more concentration on studies and some take extra time to learn something. A student who has low IQ will concentrate less than a normal student. As a result, the results of a class will not be uniform.

Thirdly, may be, teachers become dishonest when they will be paid on the basis of their students learning. They will not teach them things that will help our future life. Instead of that, they will be worry about the results of the tests and exams of the students. For example, they teach only the topics which they are going to give in the exams because they will want their students to get good grades. That is because they know that if the grades of the students will be good then their salary will be increased.

In conclusion, Teachers should not be paid on the basis of their students learning because many other people than teachers are responsible for students’ academic success and also this will affect both students and teachers badly.

 PS: I'm writing this to practice my TOEFL writing. 

댓글 없음:

댓글 쓰기